Self-Portrait Poem
Shivan
hates being board, Adrenaline Junkie, fun,
Gino and Jake
Fast cars, snowboarding, hanging out with friends
Happy,board, annoyed
Cars, snow, motocycles
exotic cars, amazing snowy mountain, success
Lives somewhere amazing with a big city and country sides
Lingam.
Hmmm.... this looks like it was done in a hurry. I liked the adrenaline junkie image followed up with the fast cars etc. Make sure you follow the format of the assignment. It was difficult to tell which line was what.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you love cars really much^^. So do my parents. They can call a car's name and it's advantages without hesitate. Do you want to have a job about cars in the future?
ReplyDeleteLike Mrs. Meeks, I enjoyed the whole feel of the poem. Since I know you, I know how much you enjoy cars and X-games. I think it expresses you very well. So in the future, where would you like to work and what car would you like to drive?
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